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Whirlpool

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  The smooth aquatic water rippled around the ship. It was gorgeous, with the reflection of the blue sky, birds and clouds soaring above, in the water. A slight breeze ruffled my bronze wavy hair and I sighed.
  The scent of the crystal water was refreshing and clear. It calmed my excitement of the adventure between worlds. This world was beautiful but nonetheless, it was time to move onto the next.
  “Everyone! Are you ready?” a voice called out.
  I glanced around and saw the captain of the ship, James, standing on the platform where the steering wheel was. His eyes were light brown but there was a glint of anticipation that merged in with it.
  “Yes!” the crew and I answered enthusiastically.
  A shiver of exhilaration travelled up my spine as I saw the centre of the river dip in, making a large swirling whirlpool that swirled down into oblivion.
  “Are you ready, sister?” a young boy whispered next to my ears.
  I smiled and nodded. Of course I was ready. I love the transportation between worlds. It brings excitement that could never be matched with anything else.
  “Sister, what do you think our new world would be?” my younger brother asked softly.
  I turned towards him and gazed into the deep brown eyes that people so often tell us that it was the most prominent feature that we both share. His face was lined with nervousness and fear, a feeling that completely contrasted with my own. It was his second time travelling between worlds and I completely empathise with the feeling as I have once felt the same way.
  I grabbed his clammy hands and held it tightly.
  “Don’t worry!” I reassured, “You don’t need to be scared. You have me! We will always be together.”
  My younger brother nodded and slowly beamed at me, his hand squeezing mine as we approached closer to the dip.
  “My fellow mates!” the captain yelled over the rushing water, “We are almost there! It is finally another time to embrace the new world! Say your last farewell to this one!”
  I looked out to the natural scenery that beautified the rest of the land. Lush green pine trees dotted around the river and mountains rosed magnificently above the landscape, creating the most serene world I have ever visited.
  “Ten...nine...eight...seven-” the ship crew counted enthusiastically.
I stared at the pathway of the ship. Water was lapping roughly against the hull of the ship. We were almost there!
  “-five...four-“
  “Sister, hold on to me!” my brother yelled over the crashing water.
  I rubbed his hand in comfort and brought him closer to my body, his warm breath slightly tickling my stomach area.
  “-two...one!”
  A roar filled my ears as the ship dropped down into the water crevice. Water sprayed over my face as I closed my eyes shut. I could hear the yells of my crew-ship members, the cries of my younger brother...and all I could think about is that...
  We were going on another adventure!
Hey!! I am preparing for an exam that my parents are pressuring me to be good in.
The test consists of Maths, English, Writing (and perhaps other things that i don't know of since this is the first time I would be doing it) <--- so I am extremely nervous!!!
Well, English is English ... can't really prepare too much of reading comprehension but writing ... I can!! Well the idea of this is that I write this in 40 minutes :) My friend gives me a stimulus and obviously, like every writing exam (in Australia anyways), I write about it. The reason I am doing this is to train my spur of creativity and how fast I can come with an idea.

This is the stimulus my friend gave to me: planetvide.com/wp-content/uplo…
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